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DEATHLOOP Kindle Edition
“DEATHLOOP, G. Brailey’s best-selling debut novel can be described in one word: brilliant.” LiteratiLiteratureLovers. com
“The author finally releases us from our white-knuckle, switchback ride with an exciting and unexpected finale which comes all too soon. I was so gripped by this lengthy book that I devoured it over three evenings. A stunning debut.”
“Strangers keep dying right in front of me, calling out my name, asking me to help them - three deaths now, three strangers. How do they know me? What do they want me to do?”
Zack Fortune has never had to try too hard, handsome and charismatic, a successful lawyer, life has treated him well. When his good friend, Clarissa, training to be a past life regression therapist asks him to undergo hypnosis to regress to a past life, he reluctantly agrees.
But the visions Zack encounters from his past life are horrific, (a demon dying in a sea of blood and clutching him at the throat) so ignoring Clarissa’s advice, he breaks out of the hypnosis and cuts the session short.
The following day, in an empty street, a girl, unknown to Zack, standing up on a high roof, calls to him by name screaming at him to help her. Mortified, impotent, unable to breathe, Zack can only watch as the girl jumps from the roof and plunges to her death, right in front of him. The same night, in a deserted club corridor he comes across a man barely alive, but calling out Zack’s name as though an old friend. Paralysed in exactly the same way he was when he encountered the suicide, Zack remains trapped there, a hostile witness as the man dies, oozing and decaying at his feet. Finding movement again, Zack races to find a way out of the club – a labyrinth of endless corridors and locked doors until finally he makes his escape.
Attempting to rationalise the two deaths, and to move on, the bizarre events continue to haunt Zack and with them comes a sense of foreboding.
When Zack is confronted again and again by more strangers all calling out his name before they die, and appealing for his help, Zack embarks on a desperate journey of discovery, but the more he unearths, the more he starts to question his own sanity when his life is thrown into relentless trauma and anarchy, as he becomes caught up in a vortex of myth, redemption, uncertainty and the supernatural, and as dark forces conspire to drag him down and destroy him.
“You’ve brought something back with you from this after life, something best left where it was.”
“What is hell? I don’t believe in hell, hell doesn’t exist… does it?”
What people are saying about Deathloop:
“When I hit the final third...I couldn't put the book down. I read well into the night, ending emotionally exhausted and feeling almost lost at the conclusion.”
“This is at times a terrifying unstoppable read. It is far from your everyday run of the mill thriller. This takes the genre to a new level.”
“I think that Deathloop is a thumping good read with an original, uncompromising but entertaining storyline that draws you in and hooks you.”
“An outstanding first outing from the writer. A page turner covering the highs and lows of the human condition, winds itself through the complexities of the modern world while facing the age old fears of man...”
“If you’re up for a dark, intriguing story about self-discovery, death and the meaning of life, then Deathloop is the best choice you can make. G. Brailey’s debut novel is an outstanding thriller that will keep you on the edge of your seat from beginning to end.”
Gil Brailey can be contacted on ghbscreen@aol.com
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateJune 20, 2012
- File size651 KB
Product details
- ASIN : B008DRX7D4
- Publisher : (June 20, 2012)
- Publication date : June 20, 2012
- Language : English
- File size : 651 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 402 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #5,208,263 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #3,368 in Occult Suspense
- #25,639 in Occult Horror
- #26,083 in Police Procedurals (Kindle Store)
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About the author
GIL BRAILEY is a British screenwriter living in London, UK. For the past 12 years she has worked extensively in film and television, and is currently developing two feature films. Over the years Gil has written extensively for the following programmes, EASTENDERS, LONDON'S BURNING, CASUALTY, HEARTBEAT, HARBOUR LIGHTS, NEW CROSSROADS. She also wrote the feature film THE VIRGIN OF LIVERPOOL starring oscar award nominee, IMELDA STAUNTON.
When Gil is not writing, she likes to swim, walk the dog, browse antique markets and attend flower festivals/shows. Gil lived in Culver City, Los Angeles for a year, where her children attended El Rincon school.
DEATHLOOP is her first completed novel, but another YA book provisionally entitled IT WASN'T ME, will launch soon.
Gil is also working on an E Book - SCREENWRITING MADE EASY - FOR ABSOLUTE BEGINNERS.
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There are a lot of complex relationships in Deathloop. Zack's friendship with Sam is thoroughly explored and the way Sam depends on Zack is heartbreaking. Although Brailey depicts the friendship as one sided, it's Zack that gives meaning to Sam's life; it's clear that Zack needs Sam just as much. Sam is married to Clarissa and even she realizes early on that there's no coming between Sam and Zack. Some people even suspect there's more to Sam and Zack's friendship, which would no doubt make Zack laugh in their faces if he knew what was said. Others believe there's something between Zack and Clarissa. Then we have Susan, Zack's ex-girlfriend who doesn't understand their relationship is over. At times you feel for Susan because she's the victim of Zack's callous use and yet you wish someone would sit down with her and give her a good shaking. Brailey also introduces Zack's new girlfriend, Veronica, and it's interesting to see how different he is with her versus Susan. Finally we have to make sense of Jason and how he's connected to Zack. Every person in Deathloop is broken in some way, but isn't that true of our regular lives? Each and every one of us has a past that makes us who we are and affects our relationships in varying degrees. How often do we ignore the warnings others give us? When we do, do we it do it because it was suppose to be that way?
While we have a lot of characters and subplots, at times I felt didn't need to know what each secondary character was thinking. In hindsight, I realize they are strategically placed. All characters play a central role and at the end, it all becomes clear. One of the criticisms of Deathloop is "a lot of things happen," and indeed they do, however; everything Brailey sets up is for a reason. Our journey is to help Zack figure out how he got to this moment in time. It's difficult to feel any empathy for Zack, and yet you can't help feel sorry for him now and then. Here is a man use to being in command and when his life begins to spiral out of control, he struggles. Zack attempts on numerous occasions to decipher what is real and what's imagined. Everyone he speaks to cannot offer any explanation as to why complete strangers are dying exclusively in front of him and most just assume his past drug use has caught up to him. When he does have the opportunity to meet with people who can provide the answers, they don't. Here is where the plot picks up steam. Do these people fail to give him a way out because they don't know how to help or are afraid to get involved and mess with what's preordained?
If I could touch upon one small item to note: there are a lot of Britishisms and if you aren't familiar with British culture or slang you might feel overwhelmed. Please don't let this stop you from reading the book or giving up. Go and research the phrase that stumps you. Even if you think you are well versed, you might be caught by surprise.
I'm not going to touch upon the ending for fear of spoiling it, but it left me emotionally drained. It made me question my own beliefs regarding life, death, and even the idea of reincarnation. I also wondered about one's predestined role (if you believe in that). If Clarissa had not dabbled in past life regression, what would Zack's destiny be? Was Zack meant to see a past life in order to fulfill his purpose in the present? It's clear that everyone has a role to play in Deathloop, even the Angel of Death cannot escape what's predestined. It's said the only thing we can be guaranteed in life is death and taxes. No matter how rich, famous, or beautiful a person is, we all the share the same ending: death.
I'll come right out and say it: this book was odd. I had a hard time liking Zack. Everything came so easily to him, no matter how much he stomped on people during the course of his daily life. At the outset, it was tiring to hear about how handsome he is and how people would bend over backwards to please him, even though he'd been stabbing them in the back for his own reasons since he was a kid. Of course, there is a REASON for this but it didn't endear me to the character any more. Zack is a jerk, plain and simple. I didn't 'hate' him but I didn't 'like' him either. I didn't even hate to like him or like to hate him. He's just there to me. The other characters are more likeable, even if they're all head over heels for the super good looking Zack. Sam, his friend since college and an odd looking guy that Zack would normally have nothing to do with, along with his wife Clarissa, who is enamored with Mr. Fortune as well, are in many of the scenes. Usually to tell him what a jerk he's been, but they're still there. There is of course, another in a long line of girlfriends, Susan, who Zack dumps. To say she doesn't take it very well is an understatement. Then there's Jason, a troubled late-teenager that doesn't want to leave Zack alone. These ancillary characters are well fleshed out but their blind devotion to Zack, even though all is explained, gets a bit old in short order.
Insofar as the story. It's long and has a tendency to ramble. There are a few reveals that were fair (no fast ones pulled here) but they were telegraphed. Which is ok, but there's no 'wow' moment as it becomes clear what's happening. I think one of the things that I'd like to have seen more of would be these deaths that Zack is alone privy to. Because of the rambling nature of the book, these events are few and far between.
On a technical side, the book had some of the oddest punctuation I've ever encountered in any book I've ever read, not to mention consistently abrupt point of view changes from paragraph to paragraph. I don't mean to bash the author, but it's an issue with me when I'm not sure whose head I'm in when going from paragraph to paragraph with nothing so much as a page break.
The book does pick up by the latter third and there are some good moments here. It's not a bad book by any stretch of the imagination. There were just a few things I wished were different both from a story perspective as well as a technical aspect, thus it gets a solid 3.
I was very surprised to find out it was a debut novel.
I found the story very easy to follow. It was very well written with very few typos. I don't remember even one.
There are quite a few characters, so complex, that to me they sound like they were drawn from real people.
The story slowed down a little in the middle, but the plot and the characters were so interesting I had to keep going and finish it.
I don't like extreme suspense, and there was a part where I thought I knew what was going to happen and I thought it was going to be bad, but I was wrong and it wasn't. So I started reading it again.
As I said, I found this to be an amazing story, extremely well written, full of twists and turns, not predictable.
This is not a formulaic story.
But it is, in my opinion, brilliant.
5 Stars.
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I think that Deathloop is a thumping good read with an original, uncompromising but entertaining storyline that draws you in and hooks you. It also has an imaginative main character in Zack Fortune as well as well-structured sub-characters. I also think this book has a lot of soul and it's always a joy to read a book from someone who writes from the heart.
Zack is certainly an interesting character, and the true story of Deathloop is his own. Contrary to his outward appearance he is actually quite dislikeable in many ways. A selfish womaniser who cares little for the effect his choices have on others. In many ways his story asks one question to the reader. Are the terrible things that occur to him the result of supernatural forces out to get him, or merely the result of bad choices from his past and his present?
Deathloop has many moments of extremely poetic prose, especially during the moments Zack has his often bloody visions of death. These visions are the main source of the stories supernatural element, although for the most part these feel more like a side element rather then the main focus of the story. Those expecting ghosts to be popping out of closets every ten minutes or so may be disappointed. The true horror in this story is the very real effects bad mistakes can have on peoples lives. He is not the only character with problems, and as the story progresses we find that in many ways, he is the cause of a great deal of mental misery. The main supporting characters are also very well written , especially his life long friend Sam Stine. Although at times a little too much detail is given to minor characters.
This leads to perhaps the really minor flaw in this piece which is the pacing. At the start and around the middle of Deathloop we often leave the story of Zack for some of these minor characters views and stories. Whilst these are still well written and interesting, I confess I found myself hurrying along to get back to the main narrative. However as the book speeds along to its dramatic conclusion the pacing becomes tighter and I certainly found the ending of the piece satisfying and thought provoking.
In conclusion I would certainly recommend this title to anyone looking for a interesting thriller and character study. The main characters are very in-depth and well written and the prose at times very vivid. While the pacing at first can be a little off, in the end the pay-off is certainly well put together. Upon finishing I found myself a little stunned even, certainly not expecting things to go the way they do. Whilst the supernatural element is not as big as some readers might like there certainly is a very real, very dark feel to this piece throughout.
Worse was the realisation that I found the book boring, yes, utterly and totally boring! I plodded on thinking that it must be me - look at all those reviews praising the story!
I must admit that in the end I gave up and stopped reading about a third of the way through, after deciding I didn't give a damn what happened to the main character, or indeed any of the other characters.
I definitely wouldn't recommend this book to anyone.
Caution is advised over the first couple of chapters,a flashback caused me some confusion,but after that, the story unfolds at a rate of knots and I was totally absorbed.
The story is set mainly in and around London,but there is an eventful trip to The Peak District,which has one of the book's most dramatic scenes,and the beginnings of the final,exciting denouement take place in The Cotswolds. There are many twists and turns along the way,and I found myself compulsively moving onto one more chapter, when really ready to retire,on several occasions.
The ending was a total surprise. There is the ultimate final twist, which was completely unexpected to me,and the author comes up with plausible explanations for the mysterious deaths that occur in the story, and for the events that have shaped the hero's character.
A book with a proper,satisfying,albeit not 'Happy ever after', conclusion. Recommended.